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dun like the black tribal behind the logo. seems too separate from it.
and the 'L' fades out too much, at first glance i only see the 'J' because its so "BAM" in your face
lettering could be slightly more toned down

like the rest of it tho.
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Meh, don't like it, the colors don't really go well together and the black tribals don't fit. It's also not exactly a logo, it's more of a banner.
Try going for simple shapes like just a stylish acronym.
too many colors, shades, objects, effects... looks like you have some good ideas but its all too messy.

I'd recommend trying and start from a single color and base idea, without any effects, then once the whole shape is truly done and looks good without anything, add some gradients and effects as a finishing touch.
Originally Posted by Zaarock View Post
too many colors, shades, objects, effects... looks like you have some good ideas but its all too messy.

I'd recommend trying and start from a single color and base idea, without any effects, then once the whole shape is truly done and looks good without anything, add some gradients and effects as a finishing touch.

The dood speeks troo.
L could be larger, cuz i didn't notice it until i read the comment

perhaps shifting the tribals up would do the trick? I'm not sure, since i don't do logos much, it's just an idea

I'm fine with the colors and the rest is epic ^_^
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