HTOTM: FUSION
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trying poetry
euthanasia, a short poem





on wings of sand i fly
all the while, fading into a forgotten dream

on tears of night i choke
all the while, drowning in pure euthanasia


this hivemind has consumed me;
but i've never been so blissfully numb.


i'm breaking out.
desolate echo chamber.


pure euthanasia.
pretty cool poem, I was following it well until the hive mind part, unsure of what that means in this context or how it fits in with the whole image you're setting up/creating.

other than that. Kewl
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very creative, i would like to see more like this

i like your metaphors and choice of words
Last edited by MrSofty; Jul 21, 2019 at 11:47 AM.
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