hmmm first im gonna mention the fact that your replays should NEVER (unless itsa voodoo ,archery or shurikun kinda thing) have self dms.
really they ruin the whole video.
the first one id give 5/10
the second 4/10
the third 9/10 (i liked this one alot)
the fourth 7/10
ok overall id say you need to grab less, fix the self dms and, if your making an sp vid and you try to dm uke at any point and it fails,dont continue the video.you can edit the replay from before you failed and fix whatever is wrong.