Very nice work there Hobo. The feel it sends out is powerful and nicely presented. I do however, have a couple problems and/or crit's.

The design fits decently in itself, but could definitely use some styling. Grunge, slight tint, etc. Also, the text is pretty bad. Neither the font nor the colors match the overall image. I would like to see you touch up those two things and show it to me if you're still willing to put some work into it :P