Hmmm, well this is what i have to say on every single one of yours:
Boom boom i want u in my room2:
Rating: 5/10
Reason: It was stiff, you had quite alot of times where you could of dismembered Uke, but some dismemberents are better than none.
Also the "boom" was a grab, which shoudln't be happening, you should not grab uke in a boomhit replay.
Blalablaala3:
Rating: 8/10
Reason: The beggining kick was nice and smooth, but the launch up to the head wasn't, but I like the style you did it in, also, the part where you kicked Uke's glutes and hip off, was actually a bit stiff.
Pose2:
Rating: 4/10
Reason: It was a little bit stiff, the decapping was the most stiff in that replay, but I like the style that you used to get into your pose, keep it up.
Boomboompower z4:
Rating: 6/10
Reason: Getting better now, no way as stiff as your previous replays and I liked the decap.
But I saw some times where more DM's could be made, keep practicing!
Longest throw definatley:Rating: 5/10 (For the throw)
Reason: Because this replay is about throwing the DM you made, i'll evaluate that.
It was a tad stiff when you threw it..but it went further and further, and I didn't think it would stop, nice throw ^.^
Boom hit new:
Rating: 6/10
Reason: Almost the same as Boomboompower z4, infact, it's nearly exactly the same in reason, and this time, the boom hit was actually decent for your "level" at the moment, you are doing quite well.
Super punch almost:
Rating: 7/10
Reason: Wow, your really learning now, was with no doubt smoother than your other replays, I didn't expect this.
The only thing that was wrong was the punch, it was slow, but atleast it had decent power.
7:
Rating: 6/10
Reason: A bit of a letdown..it wasn't relaxed, it was held all the way through unlike some of your other replays, and you paused for a while then extended your knee, thats not a good idea if you want to look good.
I can dance too all mine2:
Rating: 8/10
Reason: I was stunned at 1400 frames below, you relaxed all the way, if not most the way, and it just generally looked good, keep this up, I can see improvement in you on a big scale!
Rocket man2:
Rating: 6/10
Reason: Downgraded again, try relaxing your whole body every 30-50 frames, it will look smoother and you will get more openings for DM's.
+5:
Rating: 8/10
Reason: Now thats more like it, a nice relaxed decap and a small madman, you have improved alot!
One thing though, you paused alot in the beggining, but thats not a major fault, just a minor.
7:
Rating: 6/10
Reason: Your losing it again, keep trying, use the style that you used in +5 and then you'll be fine.
7_Zinx:Rating: 7/10
Reason: A little better than 7, but WAY to many grabs, try manipulation (hitting Uke's body to make him move).
Watcha?:
Rating: 6/10
Reason: Same reason as 7_Zinx, but keep up the good work buddy!
This evaluation took me an hour to do, so comment back on your feelings ^.^
Boom boom i want u in my room2:
Rating: 5/10
Reason: It was stiff, you had quite alot of times where you could of dismembered Uke, but some dismemberents are better than none.
Also the "boom" was a grab, which shoudln't be happening, you should not grab uke in a boomhit replay.
Blalablaala3:
Rating: 8/10
Reason: The beggining kick was nice and smooth, but the launch up to the head wasn't, but I like the style you did it in, also, the part where you kicked Uke's glutes and hip off, was actually a bit stiff.
Pose2:
Rating: 4/10
Reason: It was a little bit stiff, the decapping was the most stiff in that replay, but I like the style that you used to get into your pose, keep it up.
Boomboompower z4:
Rating: 6/10
Reason: Getting better now, no way as stiff as your previous replays and I liked the decap.
But I saw some times where more DM's could be made, keep practicing!
Longest throw definatley:Rating: 5/10 (For the throw)
Reason: Because this replay is about throwing the DM you made, i'll evaluate that.
It was a tad stiff when you threw it..but it went further and further, and I didn't think it would stop, nice throw ^.^
Boom hit new:
Rating: 6/10
Reason: Almost the same as Boomboompower z4, infact, it's nearly exactly the same in reason, and this time, the boom hit was actually decent for your "level" at the moment, you are doing quite well.
Super punch almost:
Rating: 7/10
Reason: Wow, your really learning now, was with no doubt smoother than your other replays, I didn't expect this.
The only thing that was wrong was the punch, it was slow, but atleast it had decent power.
7:
Rating: 6/10
Reason: A bit of a letdown..it wasn't relaxed, it was held all the way through unlike some of your other replays, and you paused for a while then extended your knee, thats not a good idea if you want to look good.
I can dance too all mine2:
Rating: 8/10
Reason: I was stunned at 1400 frames below, you relaxed all the way, if not most the way, and it just generally looked good, keep this up, I can see improvement in you on a big scale!
Rocket man2:
Rating: 6/10
Reason: Downgraded again, try relaxing your whole body every 30-50 frames, it will look smoother and you will get more openings for DM's.
+5:
Rating: 8/10
Reason: Now thats more like it, a nice relaxed decap and a small madman, you have improved alot!
One thing though, you paused alot in the beggining, but thats not a major fault, just a minor.
7:
Rating: 6/10
Reason: Your losing it again, keep trying, use the style that you used in +5 and then you'll be fine.
7_Zinx:Rating: 7/10
Reason: A little better than 7, but WAY to many grabs, try manipulation (hitting Uke's body to make him move).
Watcha?:
Rating: 6/10
Reason: Same reason as 7_Zinx, but keep up the good work buddy!
This evaluation took me an hour to do, so comment back on your feelings ^.^
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