Horrible DSC
You need banners, more info, a variety of fonts, different colors so we can tell which section is which, your members to post, read the stickies, they are there to help you.
Good Luck
Your gonna need it
You should have:
story
some more aims
clan bank
banner
and more creativity
if you need help just pm me
Well you do need to add these things above for the desc to be perfect. Also you could use better font when making your dsc. You don't never want to have things all put together. You would want them to be spread out a little.
On the other hand good luck. Have any more question? Pm me.