HTOTM: FUSION
Original Post
Sam's Replay Thread
Yep, I am posting here so I can post some replays I made and will need some tips if I need to improve somewhere.
Attached Files
HeadKick Test.rpl (110.6 KB, 12 views)
HeadKick Twirl.rpl (140.1 KB, 14 views)
Headkick_Test: Slow and boring moves, only 1 dm... didn't pose, freestyle or dance whatsoever... 800 frames for what? ~ 1/10

Headkick Twirl: Need to improve opener...another useless dm... after the dm you just jumped around from 1 place to another... pose was OK. ~ 2/10

Some tips: Add more speed, get more momentum, get some booms or more dm's, freestyle a bit if you have time on the end.
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Originally Posted by HaYZ View Post
Headkick_Test: Slow and boring moves, only 1 dm... didn't pose, freestyle or dance whatsoever... 800 frames for what? ~ 1/10

Headkick Twirl: Need to improve opener...another useless dm... after the dm you just jumped around from 1 place to another... pose was OK. ~ 2/10

Some tips: Add more speed, get more momentum, get some booms or more dm's, freestyle a bit if you have time on the end.

Alright, I can do better, I just need to think of better openers then random jumps and kicks.

By the way, new replay. Tell me if I have to add/take away/edit please
Attached Files
MADhampaMAN.rpl (218.6 KB, 15 views)
MADhampaMAN - The opener looks nice on the initial 40 frames... you just ruined with that decap dm. You take a lot of time to go for another dm. Weak kicks and big usage of grab. Messy. Pose kinda fail. ~ 2.5/10

Also, a tip: don't start with a decap.

You need to improve a lot yet... but with time, you'll get there.
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these are terrible, i'm sorry but you need to be better
you done 1 dm and then posted even though you could of
done a skeet or even and kick in half and and then a head decap

twirl was nothing special.
5/10

test was
3/10

terrible come on man i think you can do better because
i can tell by the replays.
Meh....I am trying, those were just Fluency Tests atm. Will try better though, just not now because school, homework, etc

Alright, this is Sam, posting another replay cause I don't want to wait for 20 Hours to post another replay.
Tamer0 Moderated Message:
Merged. <24 hour bump auto-merge is here for a reason.

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Sorry, wrong replay, lol
Attached Files
Falcon Pawnch.rpl (49.4 KB, 8 views)
Last edited by Tamer0; Dec 14, 2010 at 10:36 PM.
I'm someone....but who?
The replay was Ok, but try to refrain from rubbing your tori against uke and use less grab and work on making your movements more fluent.
6/10
<Fish> How is being a dumbass a form of venting? Is this some sort of flatulence related joke?