4/10[first one]
i dont like how all the colors clash with one another, sure red and black go, but how u havnt blended them, [if you have obviosuly it aint seeable] u need to do a lot of work and blending, may i suggest reading more tutorials?
and the second one i give a 5.5/10
i like how u dun the text, its got better then the first one, but u left all that grey space which just isnt needed and could have had a c4d-render more efects to it, also you kept with the same brushing behind the text, that reli needs to go =/
[sorry if that sounded harsh, but u asked for a coment, also if u want, u tell em wat type of tutorial you want and ill get u one, ive got a file with over 200 tutorials for text and sigs]