I made it for him :L. I tried using it again though because I never finished that sig and I didn't really like it.
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Really, really, really needs a background man. Without it you can't create any sort of depth, lighting or flow very well. I find transparent sigs a bit dull as well

Your smudging isn't bad, however, it's generally not best to smudge outwards from the person. It destroys flow, flow only has one direction, not multiple. There are exceptions to this rule but directions that kind of come out of the focal aren't very widely accepted. Your smudge technique doesn't seem bad at all though, the effect itself is rather pleasing to the eye.


^See how everything is uniform and moving in the same direction.

My next issue is the scan lines, Carl predicted it. Yeah I hate them, in this sig, they don't fit your flow at all, the natural flow of the render (look at how he's holding the gun and the angle of his body) is opposite to the direction of the scan lines.

The text is actually fairly well executed. I mean it blends pretty well. However, it doesn't change the fact that I hate text. It just annoys me, it almost creates a second focal, if you get what I mean. But as far as text goes, I quite like it.