The text is pretty bad, the color doesn't match at all with the picture and the background, I'd advise downloading new fonts.
The image you used isn't that great either, it's in a generic standing pose. Most people would want something with a little more 'spark' to set it aside from others work.
The white transparent lens flare on the very end doesn't look well either, it could've been positioned better.
7/10
good for beginner work.