Toribash
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[Tex] PRAdA Head
This head is currently still being made. I will be creating an entire set for this.



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Last edited by PRAdA; Jun 25, 2011 at 11:33 AM.
It looks very rough ATM.
You will probably fix that later as you go on with this.
Mapping is strange, to me it doesn't make any real sense, and eyes are way too high.
Perhaps make a bit of those blue stripes asymmetric.
Well, keep it up.
It's All About Expansion
yeah well i completed this much so far in 20 minutes, so its still in early stages, and im aware that the mapping isnt the best at the moment, but that can all be fixed later on :P
Thanks, I'm hoping it will be . already started on the rest of the set, although been really busy with work, study, etc. So it's hard to get the time to sit down and work on it D:
The mapping looks very generic and bad. The gold color is terribly shaded and pixelated. There is a seam going down the center, as you mirrored it incorrectly(you didnt stretch the line a bit past the center), and it looks like you did not even reverse the angle of the effects you used on one side.

Overall, its pretty rough, but it has potential if you fix all the mistakes. You really need to work on how you mirror stuff, as its very shabby. The shading isn't outrageously bad, but I don't like it.

Before you continue the head, I suggest you buff out the small issues, such as the seam, and fix the mirroring.

5/10.
Hoss.
as i said before

"yeah well i completed this much so far in 20 minutes, so its still in early stages, and im aware that the mapping isnt the best at the moment, but that can all be fixed later on :P"

I posted the head in its early stages so i could get a general feedback of the design/idea, before i make a set for it. It's always good to have a perspective from other minds. Yes the lines don't meet, and the shading isn't the best yet, but I'm obviously not planning on keeping it that way. It's so incredibly easy to fix these errors. I have already fixed most of these imperfections, plus added new features, colours, edited mapping etc. and will upload the updated version of it soon