I tried to make this smooth with gradients and a design that switches colors. I personally like abstract designs :>



CC please.

The gradient is good but I don't like the lines, they are not very flu-ed. There are a few bumps and edges that I would have fixed. The 2 purple lines in the middle need to be a little faded on the edges but other than that, its actually a good abstract.

7.5/10

Seems like the lines stick out too much in the center, as in, they're too clear. It seems distracting to me.

7/10

Not bad though.

Bad colour choise.
Gradient sucks.
Brushes (circles) sucks.
Contrast and opacity sucks. I can hardly see anything here.
Lines are edgy sometimes. Use pentool next time.
Some of them are too blurred.
That 'H' line doesn't fit at all.

@ugonadie, thanks, i'll try to fix the bumps and lines so they curve more/bumpless.
@Eldricht, I should probably fade the middle grey part more, thanks.
@Maccross, I'll go in order:
Bad color choice is more of an opinion.
Be more specific, rather than saying they suck.
Again, be more specific, what sucks about it.
Where exactly do you not see much here? [The gradient in the line matching the background?]
I'll keep that in mind.
I'll sharpen it next time.
I agree.

Thanks for CC!