Secret Santa 2024
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[Art] Poem I guess...
Is this a poem? I really would like to know.

theese words just popped into my head while taking a walk with a friend of mine....Eventually are there any grammatic errors?


Life = a Prison
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Life is a prison, a prison of questions.

Questions about an unknown knowledge,

knowledge we do not meet the requirements to know.

Life is a prison of confusion.

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What do you think of it? Is it worth keeping?
"Is a poem worth keeping?", asked in the art section. That question perhaps intrigues me more than the poem itself. How do we value art? As an artistic presentation, consider the artist creating and the audience receiving the art. Your poem at least has value for you. It captures your feelings in the moment. You could save it and look back years later and see perhaps how you have changed in your outlook. Within the prison you find yourself in there is an infinite array of thoughts to explore, cherish, and perhaps share.