HTOTM: FUSION
First of all, yes, I know the competition is over.
But I said that if EvilStealthWarrior could provide a link, I'd write a new poem.

And if THIS one turns up on some other site, I know that I'm being hoaxed, trolled, et cetera.

And even though I doubt the supposed evidence against me, I'm writing another poem anyway. It's down below, after my little talk about the odd things about the link.

I'm glad I write these in word documents and not on here.
Database went down just as I was about to post the second love poem for Rainbowz.

Anyways, the poem to prove my creativity is below. Could've been better, but hey, I only have so much free time.

First of all, I'm shocked and amazed.
Whether I'm shocked and amazed that, by some random coincidence, a grieving widow and I both wrote pretty much the same poem (and I'd love to talk to her if she exists, since anyone who references Red vs. Blue in a poem dedicated to their late husband must be quite an amazing person), or shocked and amazed at what I suspect to be a mild ruse by EvilStealthWarrior. Possibly to get me to post.

Anyways, there's a few things I'd like to point at.

The format of the website is different to the screenshot. And I checked it out in Chrome, Firefox, Internet Explorer, Safari, and as of about 5 minutes ago, Opera. AND my mobile browsers, just to be sure.

The most interesting thing is that the poem is under review for abuse, and has one review, from about a day ago. Said reviewer seems to be no-where else on that site, or have an account that can be checked out.
And now that I've said this, I'm sure that they will. Well, we shall see.

Anyways, enough about that. Here's the poem (unstructured, no pentameter or intentional rhyming pattern) about my love for Rainbowz and a little reminiscence, as well as some obscure references to my favourite things.


Ranbowz, my love for you
Burns, always true
As a candle
To the flame
From the cradle
To the grave
This beating heart
Slow to start
Never to sop
Goes on and on
For you
Only for you
And I find myself
Pulling on my gloves
Picking up my bag
The cans clink
Ever so lightly
As I shift
Ever so slightly
And I'll walk
I'll swagger
Proud of my love
For you

Look by me
And you will see
The writing
On the wall
Red on white
White on red
The drying paint
Says it all
"Living like this, we
Were already dead, so
Why don't we just
Love instead?"
Verbose, I could have been
Should'f been faster
I could've been seen
Out with the eloquence
Cut out the crap
This spray-can drops
From my hand
I'll simply turn
And walk the other way

Love makes us do
Some crazy things
But I don't give a damn
Not one iota of shit
Doin' my visual bit
I'll write on the wall
All day long
Carefree, the way
It was meant to be
Cause I don't care
About nothing but
You, and only you
And I'll carry my bag
And swagger
And though I ain't no
Mick Jagger, I can still
Scream to the world
About my love
My endless love for you

Can't you see, it's just you
And me, we were
Meant to be
I'll tell you, as I sway
Plain as
The pain in my eyes
As we stand
So far away

So let's enjoy
Life, for what it is
Let's just enjoy
To the highest degree
This freedom
With oh-so-little scrutiny
You might call me careless
Call me slow
As I write on the wall
While the street-lights glow
But you're not gonna change me
And I ain't gonna change you
And that's why I love you
Through and through

So I'll keep on writing
And I'll keep on waiting
Everyone else
Can just go on hating
Rainbowz, it's just me and you
So I'll ramble on, and hope
That my dreams will
All come true
So I'll walk
And I'll write
And ramble
On and on
Until the day that I
Can finally meet you
Greet you
And confess
The truth of my
Aching heart

Girl, I just simply
Cannot express

My love
For you.
Last edited by FrostFyre; Feb 14, 2012 at 08:32 AM.
"When you wish upon a star, you are a few million years too late. That star is dead. Just like your dreams."