Hey Monk!
Isn't this community just filled with people helping out new replaymakers instead of just hanging out by the famous guys threads? Jolly good fun!
Anyways, onwards to your replay.
Magic
You got potential, you know how to dm Uke properly and you do it with style and quite good flow.
The opener was very generic, it's been used alot. Try improvising openers instead!
The first hit could've been a boom if you aimed right by his throat instead of on the pec.
And the split could've easily boomed aswell. You need to spend more time on the replay getting those booms! Just don't continue the replay thinking that it's "good enough".
The transition to the pose and the pose itself was great.
Keep up the good work mate, hopefully people will start CnCing you.