So im starting to try to make replays and here is one i made in ~30 minutes

Sorry i have shitty replay names

Very nice i liked it, next time maybe add more time and try to DM also the legs and maybe try not to move the head to decap him xDD Other than that nice job 8/10!

It had style and also cool flow in it

didn't like the first hit, I mean the hit was nice but your position looked ugly when you did that kick.
the decap was great, kinda liked it.

thanks for the CnC, im gonna start to make them i guess c:

Try working on less grab and less relaxing, you're over-laxing a bit :/

Epic mang :3

Other than being off balanced a bit, I didn't see much error.

Your hits were generally clean and aimed well.
Not much else to CnC, since it was short. :P

//OffTopic If you ever want to sell that set... ;)

Your replays sux.
I hate you.
GIVE ME SEX GOD DAMNIT.
MAKE MOAR.

But, yeah, the opener was alright.
However, once that grab stuck, all the momentum and flow you got from the opener suddenly stopped, then started again with that kick. This type of thing looks pretty bad and choppy. You always want to aim for smooth and fluid. (Like chamara said, don't relax too many joints. Try to use most of the joints you find useful to helping you get more flow, speed, momentum, etc)
About the two kicks, they were both at pretty awkward angles, and the transition between them was pretty generic. Meaning, bland, plain, unoriginal and whatnot.
ABOUT UKE'S NECK - Bad Ave, bad! No touchy touchy Uke in a ukebashing replay. >:c
But, yeah, you've gotten way better, but you have a lot more to learn.