if not, go ahead and move this, anyways, just wanted to announce my latest song "mad wheeled"

It's up on my myspace: www.myspace.com/bretjordanlots

questions? comments? CRITIQUE? XD the last one I want a lot of.. but only constructive.

Pretty good, and catchy too. \o\ /o/ \o\ /o/

Only thing I would suggest would be to mix it up a bit, it sounded a bit repetitive throughout the song.

as a fellow fruity loops composer, i say this song rocks, but while introducing new beats, add some that are very bassy and loud (makes the song a lot better). this is better than all the songs I've made, so i will just give some tips as how to make your music even better.
Amazing

very impressive! i like it as i am a fellow music maker. i use garageband tho apples only XP

yea, all my songs are quite repetitive, it's hard to make them not repetitive. thanks for the tips and critique ^^