Toribash
Cnc. yiss.
Opener was cool and unique. The first 10 frames felt like nothing new but the way you turn it into that wide stand is epic. That left shoulder at 750 is something I guess people would complain on but personally I don't mind. Replay continues all fancy until that insane kick which you should get a half-polished medal for. The way you stop the rotation for a moment then directly accelerate into a new one is epic. It adds much to the stylish part of the replay. Good work with getting uke into a position you can work with by tapping him with your hand. However at 600 your arms seem to get a bit twitchy and as cro mentioned the grab was meh. (You can edit that out in notepad without consequences though ;p) Beautifull follow up boom on that. Spin after was ok but I like how you transferred into the pose from that. For the post I think relaxing elbows a bit more and getting a more "finished" pose like you just ended the fight.
Overall the replay was great and the fact that you got single dm's with boomforce makes it look fantastic.
There also appears like you swallowed someone. +5 points to gryffindor.
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I don't exactly have time to do an in-depth CnC right now, but that was a pretty nice replay. I enjoyed watching it, couple things could be fixed. Like the pose.
I will say I'll edit CnC into this, but probably won't since I'm a lazy bum.

In the meantime, look at this tricking shit.
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