The replays were too slow for the song.
The cc was bad.

I guess the main problem with the video was with the replay speed and the cc.
Okay, I'll redo everything but still use the same song on Friday, fixing the cc and replay speed. Maybe add a vignette.

Please don't.

If you can give me a better song, pass it to me.

All kinds of music channels on youtube.
Take the time to go through them.

Examples:
http://www.youtube.com/user/TelevisorMusic
http://www.youtube.com/user/UKFMusic
http://www.youtube.com/user/MonstercatMedia
http://www.youtube.com/user/SwagyTracks

And the list goes on.