Controversial Invasion of Lux: Never grab before you dm uke. It's acceptable sometimes, but it's not a good thing to do. As Larfen said, "It shows that you don't have control of uke and have to grab him to help you dm him".
Your abs were twitching throughout most of the replay, lol.
The actual punch and kick were pretty good, but you were pretty stiff. You also want to get into a pose before the frames end, it makes it look better. I'll cnc more later.