I see you have good idea of making a vids, but you should chill your camera a bit and dont keyframe it so randomly ;)
"Film look" or however its called fx looks nice, maybe a little too wobbly, but its mixing with music and replay pretty nicely.
About the footage, wtf shoes xD Replays was pretty good. Try syncing your vid, thats like the most important thing to do imo. You can try using "velocity" that makes syncing whole lot easier. Not bad for first vid