I see that I'm not the only pervo around, hehe
but yeah, generally, your sketches are better than your digital re-works. That's understandable and I'm sure you'll get even better at the digital stuff.
now I'm gunna nitpick
the parting in her hair looks weird, feels oddly placed
and her eye is a little awk too, like it's sliding out.
her legs are little weird too
otherwise, fantastic job Mike. With your permission of course, could I line art and color this?