HTOTM: FUSION
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Soo yeah I'm Miyako and heres where I put my replays lets start of with a tricking replay.
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-M- Rotate.rpl (415.8 KB, 55 views)
Last edited by Miyako; Dec 4, 2019 at 04:45 PM.
"*bursts into tears* I can't talk about it! It's so horrible! They were-- they were-- the milk! Oh God, the milk!."
i dont like the "pauses'' inbetween the tricks, kinda ruins the flow

kinda ruins the flow, when running and stuff try to not make it look like ur super upset and stomping ur feet really really fucking hard

also the first 170 frames would have been nice if it wasnt followed with the rest of it, i rather like the beginning a lot tbh
I was thinking about redoing the replay from the start tbh and I think I am btw I've only just recently gotten into tricking so bare with my un flowwy transitions
Last edited by Miyako; Jul 9, 2014 at 09:16 PM.
"*bursts into tears* I can't talk about it! It's so horrible! They were-- they were-- the milk! Oh God, the milk!."
Not bad at all, especially since you just started.
Like cat said, improve your flow and transitions. One of the ways to do that is to make sure that you don't get into awkward positions when landing.
For example:
when you land after the first trick at 1312 you try to go into a step. However, you can't because your body is leaning too close to the ground and your foot isn't in the right position relative to your body. Therefore, your momentum would actually bring you backwards as opposed to forwards. You could've fixed that with a misleg (example attached) instead of trying to push yourself forwards.
Another example:
After the trick at 1174 you tried to go into a swingthru for a cork. That's not gonna look very good because you landed with the back of your leg at a 90 degree angle to the ground. The cork that you ended up getting was too straight as a result. You always want to keep your grounded leg at an acute angle to the ground so that your cork will end up going backwards as opposed to forwards or straight into the air. You did that pretty well with the cork at 418, although it was really slow at first. It may seem tedious, but redo your swingthrus until you get something that flows effortlessly with no pauses.

But yeah that's about all I have to say. Your spins look pretty nice, just work on execution and transitions and you'll be great before you know it
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misleg example.rpl (60.0 KB, 24 views)
ORMO|Retired
ty for the cnc i'd like some more tips i'll be posting more tricking replays later so i'll shoot you a pm when i get another done if you're alright with that Pr1vAt3
"*bursts into tears* I can't talk about it! It's so horrible! They were-- they were-- the milk! Oh God, the milk!."
Tried to take your advice and I've been practicing on my tricking here's what i came up with
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-M- Meh.rpl (275.7 KB, 25 views)
"*bursts into tears* I can't talk about it! It's so horrible! They were-- they were-- the milk! Oh God, the milk!."
cringey replay thread name/10

opener overused as heck, no real diversity of tricks, corks are cool and all but come on man you gotta switch that shit up. around frames 1130 was kinda eh. other than that though the movement seemed nice so just work on smoothing things and not being generic and ur goode 2 go



edit: pr1vat3 is spot on
Last edited by Nearly; Jul 29, 2014 at 09:00 AM.
wow that
sucked
Much better.
The movement was a lot smoother and you carried the flow a lot better.
Nearly knows his shit but I'd argue that you should focus on perfecting the simple stuff that people already know before getting all fancy about it. For instance:
your swingthrus go way too high and you're too vertical to the ground. When you do a swingthru you don't want your leg to touch your chest, and you really want to lean back. You have to find the balance between not leaning back too far and still getting that necessary backwards momentum. Your mislegs are looking nice, well done on that, and the flash kick was cool.
So yeah, work on balance and keep those swingthrus really stable. Once you get good at that, then focus on making stuff original and cool. Just be careful not to fall into the "I only know corks" category, like I think Nearly was saying.
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swingthru.rpl (129.6 KB, 16 views)
ORMO|Retired
I won't fall into that category hahaha i'll switch it up next time
"*bursts into tears* I can't talk about it! It's so horrible! They were-- they were-- the milk! Oh God, the milk!."
Been pretty inactive Ingame I'm gonna get more replays soon
"*bursts into tears* I can't talk about it! It's so horrible! They were-- they were-- the milk! Oh God, the milk!."