Toribash
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Gamers Replay Thread
Hello, and welcome to my new Replay thread. Hope you enjoy the replays I post and it would be appreciated if you could CnC Them as well.

[Class-G] Gamer vs. SamF1ynn.rpl

[Class-G] Subzero vs Scorpion [MK].rpl

[Class-G] Forgotten.rpl
[Nitro]| [TFF]|[TMO]"Jet beams don't melt steel fuel"~Bercat.
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Forgotten: The first split kick seemed great for a start, The opener was uncommon, but you managed to make the kick look good. What happened next kinda messed up the replay. Rubbing uke all over yourself just killed the momentum of your split kick. Work on getting cleaner hits.

Gamer vs. SamF1ynn: Avoid using your hands to launch yourself to your opponent, because it doesn't look realistic. Work on realism and the fluidity of your movements. Also I can't tell what you were doing.

Gamer vs. Scorpion: Same as in your other spar replay, make your movements fluid. Realism helps too. Make your hits more discernible.

Sorry if i CnC harshly.
Heart of Gold
No, it is ok that is exactly what I need. I am new to making singeplayer replays. I have mostly played mp. Hopefully I can get some more replays up. CnC appreciated.
[Nitro]| [TFF]|[TMO]"Jet beams don't melt steel fuel"~Bercat.
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Heres another replay for the tb community to CnC.

[Class-G] Plagued.rpl
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Heres another quick one I made up for fun.

[Class-G] HeadShot.rpl
Last edited by XxGamerzz; Sep 20, 2014 at 05:46 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
[Nitro]| [TFF]|[TMO]"Jet beams don't melt steel fuel"~Bercat.
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Plagued: You followed my advice on making clean hits and not rubbing uke all over yourself. Good work.

Heashot: well, i cant really say much. you did say yourself that it was just for fun.
Heart of Gold
Heres a one shot Bithocate Punch, CnC Appreciated.

[Class-G] Punch Bithocate.rpl
[Nitro]| [TFF]|[TMO]"Jet beams don't melt steel fuel"~Bercat.
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I'll CnC your latest three (because I go very extensive and it would take too long to do more.)

Plagued- I didn't really like this opener. It din't have much form, and it was pretty stiff. The punch wasn't too bad, but I think you could have gotten some more power behind it. At the same time though, the position you were in didn't really warrent much change. Maybe if you wound up a little more it would be better. The next kick got a bifurcate, but it wasn't a very hard kick. Try and get more speed in your replays, as well as fluidity. The way you got out of your final kick wasn't very realistic, but the pose you ended with was decent. I suggest you use the shift space feature to more use. Over all, this was pretty good, but it was generic.

Headshot- There's not much to say about this one. Your opener wasn't very creative or fast, but it got the job done. You made it to Uke and got a decap. The jump itself was decent as far as jumping on-9.82 gravity goes. The way you got the decap wasn't bad, but there wasn't much form. To get better kicks, contract your hip for a few turns first before you extend the knee, this will make it look more realistic. After the kick, you may have found another way to get to a pose instead of a jump. Quick and simple, but still decent. Well done.

Punch Bithocate- This is a one hit replay. There is nothing else. That single hit was stolen from "Swing of the Clock" by Tamer0. It's taken from the defaults. Somebody was going to notice. If you take openers from somebody, you should specify. I'm not sure if taking an opener and not specifying is bannable (I know if it's a full replay and you claim it as yours it is), but I'd avoid it in the future unless you state that it's not yours. Also, this is your replay thread, in my eyes, adding a replay means that it is yours and no one else's (unless specified)?

Also, really sorry for CnCing so hard. I do it for everybody, and I always find a lot wrong XD. Don't take it personally.
Attached Files
Tamer0 Swing of the Clock.rpl (271.5 KB, 3 views)
Last edited by SkyWhale; Sep 21, 2014 at 04:49 AM.
I used Tamer0s Opener to try and see what I could do with it, I wasnt trying to steal his replay in anyway and credit to him for the opener.
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Heres a new manipulation + Madman hybrid with a skeet at the end! Hope you enjoy.

[Class-G] Manipulated.rpl
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Heres a new manipulation + Madman hybrid with a skeet at the end! Hope you enjoy.

[Class-G] Manipulated.rpl
Last edited by XxGamerzz; Sep 22, 2014 at 12:46 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
[Nitro]| [TFF]|[TMO]"Jet beams don't melt steel fuel"~Bercat.
"01000001 01100010 01110010 01100001 01111000 01100001 01110011 "