I was worried because usually rap people post on forums (and on toribash) turns out to be terrible or at least terribly produced. This one is neither, it's pretty ok. At the very least it's well done. Getting more into details: I think every instance in which piano was used it sounded pretty bad; I'd love to hear some faster tempo but that's just a personal opinion; outros are a bit boring. Other than that it's fairly enjoyable, with title track being definitely my favorite one and an earworm. It stands out. I guess I'd say rain is my 2nd fave, despite the first 10s of intro that I really dislike.
Dunno, being harsh and sincere I'd rate it like between 5.5-7/10. Given how most rap people post in "check out my rap" threads isn't even worth getting a rating, it's not bad I guess.