Secret Santa 2024
Original Post
nice pose and composition.
One thing that looks wrong, the background character looks stiff,
try putting a stick figure with poses then draw contours or simple shapes,
then ink it.


You made a good inprovement, this drawing is amazing,
nice work, I will see if you can complete and try to help you with it.
Originally Posted by Pheature View Post
So far so good, buddy. The face is well rendered.
Not sure about the guy in he background, though. And you should probably make the horizon less squint, because it looks like the chimp is on a little big ball, let alone a planet.

I'll try to make another monkey in in the guy. Just put it to remember.
Now that you said it I just the the little big ball, I'm fixing it.
Thank you Pheature!
Originally Posted by HawkeyeTFA View Post
Pretty cool.
Looks like Warhammer monkey ._.

Thank you!
I just found some few pics about warhammer monkey in google. xD
Originally Posted by dengue View Post
nice pose and composition.
One thing that looks wrong, the background character looks stiff,
try putting a stick figure with poses then draw contours or simple shapes,
then ink it.


You made a good inprovement, this drawing is amazing,
nice work, I will see if you can complete and try to help you with it.

I'll try to improve it. I have some problems with shapes backgrounds. They never looks like what I want.
I'll talk with you on irc later for some tips in the background.
Thank you Dengue!

Little update:

Last edited by Leonardo; Jan 14, 2015 at 06:52 PM.
So far so good, buddy. The face is well rendered.
Not sure about the guy in he background, though. And you should probably make the horizon less squint, because it looks like the chimp is on a little big ball, let alone a planet.
If you don't' mind me asking, what program do you use when you draw?
Other than that there's not much to say but well done so far.
PM me with any and all questions
Originally Posted by Hattersin View Post
If you don't' mind me asking, what program do you use when you draw?
Other than that there's not much to say but well done so far.

Oh, sorry, forgot it.
PS CS6. Added to first post.
Thank you.
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New wip.
Last edited by Leonardo; Jan 14, 2015 at 11:54 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
nice start for the helmet, I see it as careless painting, but you are doing fine.

let me post pictures of the reflection of the helmet:



as a black inside glass it reflectes strongly, You need to draw space in the helmet, so it gets a real and more believeable feel.

just keep working.
I would add some kind of purple or red lighting from below monkey's face, like an inside light for helmet or maybe a source of light from the holographic UI, or something like that... Why purple or red? Goes well with the dark grey fur.

And, if you put a glare of that colored light inside his left eye you get a focus point for free in the whole package. ;> Details like that make image alive.