choppy video
too much diffusion

Your keyframing could use improvement (try keep tori in the middle of the screen)
too bright
don't like how the red changed to oranges and yellows
but i think the colours fit, which is always good
nice transitions also

Yeah I'm gonna have to agree that this video is a bit choppy m8.

And the brightness is a little too bright.

Other than that, great video.

Cool transitions

Kinda slow

it was hard to see most of the time and yeah it was slow i belive you didn't you your and the replays's full potential
keep up the good work

Did largekilla allow you to use his replays?

Thanks guys, it didnt look so bright while I was making it (rip).

What do you mean by "choppy"?

What we mean by "choppy" is that the video kind of looks like a 360p quality video.

choppy as in we can tell you dont get 30-60fps at a constant rate.
fix that.

cc is bad.

I can teach you cc , add me on skype Khalifornia.

oh, and adding rsmb and flashes doesn't make an edit.