hey buze your velo is still pretty bad. play with your keyframes and have a little bit more fun, your video is only ten seconds. it's not really creative either since that particular effect was used by everyone that uses ae at one point trying to be sly clones. there is no real pacing to the song, the speed in general just doesn't match. no p/c, laziness etc
second bit of sync in the first clip is off or doesn't make sense to me, not sure
hav more fun when u edit