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Originally Posted by Kirito View Post
Heres my first ever spar! its also a self-spar its a wip, lemme be one of the replay guise pls
btw Durka is a shit one, it was me at my best
a week ago :l
so yeah #improvement

You need help on keeping balance, solid hits, not ghosting, and looking a bit better. On the tricking side, you've got the fluidity right, but you're not doing realistic tricks.


I've put up some replays you can base off of. In charmie boi I was controlling uke but it messed up. You know I have a jumping style :P

Paw Spar is just a meh spar I enjoyed. And the tricking is tricking <3
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Originally Posted by Move View Post
You need help on keeping balance, solid hits, not ghosting, and looking a bit better. On the tricking side, you've got the fluidity right, but you're not doing realistic tricks.


I've put up some replays you can base off of. In charmie boi I was controlling uke but it messed up. You know I have a jumping style :P

Paw Spar is just a meh spar I enjoyed. And the tricking is tricking <3

i only spent 5 minutes on it tho Dx
and im aware im not doing realistic shit, im not good enuf yet
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