The first one is good Arthur. Relaxing.

What the fuck happened with second one though? Not repetitive enough. Needs a rhythm, and repeated. Something that sticks from the first 10 seconds, and is the star of the show for the rest of the song. Also fuck the alien white noise and ur drums.

EDIT: I'm 1:21 into the song and I just burst out laughing xDDD wtffff xDDD the tuba scared the shit out of me.

Fine tune it. I see where you're trying to go, but the execution isn't pretty. From 2:08 it gets better though. Still...idk.

Ik you're just messing around lel. If I were to rate, 5.5/10?