Toribash
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pong legacy
Bonjour, I'm here to get feedback and advice on my next shortfilm toribash drama Pong legacy. It's going to be a dude, training for a ping pong tournament, getting to the tournament, playing the tournament with an injury from semi finals and pulling through in the last game. Here's a preview of the hight of drama
(Wip AF, sorry for cringing in advance)



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cfqbin2lzFQ

I need help with developing the plot and general inspiration for making dramatic cuts. I'm looking for collaborators to help me produce replays. Thanks
Last edited by bossbrick; Oct 20, 2015 at 03:02 AM.