http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9uMfTkD6F8k

My first video called spit fire.Took me a day and a half to find the right song and replays.please be honest but not harsh.

If the link above dose not work,please click this one:

http://forum.toribash.com/vbtube_sho...63205&p=838523

its god damn epic!what's the song of this movie?

I think it's 'spitfire' by the Prodigy

Its a bit slow at times, and laggy too ? might be due to youtube. Camera angles arent that awesome either ( not throughout but sometimes.. )

its better than that video you made A WHILE ago though ;)

replays were cool btw *admires Ern*

Thanks for the comments guys!Hopefully i'll get better and better.

It was bad :/. Why? Here:
1.You spelt EchoMarine wrong
2.The video was only: Music, Text and Replays. That's nothing amazing.
3.Only video effect was fading to black. You could add some more effects though.
4.Replays weren't so amazing( not that I can make better). You should make something like 4 player replays.
5.You found the right song so you should made it fit >.>
6.There was that [Game] box in left down corner wich was in few replays there.
My thought:
This video seemed like: You added text, made a few screenshots and added text to them, then recorded replays with moving camera in "cool" and "goodviev" way. Then you put all that together and added Thanks for Watching text at the end. You found a song and just put it there.

I wanted to be honest and nice.

You could do better for your first try and you should ask EchoMarine for help. You could do better, but you didn't. Video wasn't so bad actually, it was something between bad-neat.

That's what a video is supposed to be.

People like to see pretty explosions and effects though.

You can make something more. I meant by that:
Boring Replays( I mean like always they only kill. Nothing like 4 players or replays made for video insted of just sending them to somebody or doing something artistic instead of just killing,dqing,pwning. )
Not Fitting Music
Whatever texts
with
No Effects at all

But for the first time video was ok.

Here is what I've told people. Theres a difference with replays and movies. With replays, you can go back, change angles, rewatch, etc. With movies you can't. Therefore, you have to present the replays. Show them off. It doesn't mean leave them there with bad angles. Since you're showing someone something, you want to make it a pleasing experience. Having discord between action and music is not pleasing, therefore sync. Theres plenty more, but I'm not going to write an essay.

Text, Music, Replays (some cool ones), Some okay camera.
6/10

Don't focus on, OMG Imma be like the best guys! Focus on what your movie needs.