Toribash
what the fuck LMAOOOO

i'm not sure where to start, it's not creative nor easy to look at.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Originally Posted by TyZi View Post
what the fuck LMAOOOO

i'm not sure where to start, it's not creative nor easy to look at.

Originally Posted by Legacy View Post
Same Tyzi, I just died a little on the inside.


^^^ that was mean and not true, yes you definitely have room to improve, and that's okay nobody was a pro at anything when they were just starting(applies to pretty much everything/every example)
Yes you need to practice harder, I see you aren't really improving(from what is see), you seem to have hit a wall, so either improve with your current style, or what I'd suggest is drop it for now and experiment with new styles and new techniques because it will broaden your horizons. Look up YouTube videos get inspired, and most importantly do what makes you happy.

Don't listen to people like them because if there is nothing constructive in what they say just ignore it, if it was real feedback it would have taken them more than 2 seconds to make a proper post.
Last edited by KDigityDog; Jan 15, 2016 at 11:06 PM.
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Originally Posted by KDigityDog View Post
^^^ that was mean and not true, yes you definitely have room to improve, and that's okay nobody was a pro at anything when they were just starting(applies to pretty much everything/every example)
Yes you need to practice harder, I see you aren't really improving(from what is see), you seem to have hit a wall, so either improve with your current style, or what I'd suggest is drop it for now and experiment with new styles and new techniques because it will broaden your horizons. Look up YouTube videos get inspired, and most importantly do what makes you happy.

Don't listen to people like them because if there is nothing constructive in what they say just ignore it, if it was real feedback it would have taken them more than 2 seconds to make a proper post.

shut up

it's true, because he's making sonic OC's. in case it went over your head, that means he's taking another design and changing it a little to make it look like his own.
i'm willing to bet if the characters you draw are supposed to represent you, the hair is the farthest thing from you. it has no shape to it, it's not even similar in every other picture.
i think he's mastered drawing sonic.. rofl. time to stray away from that to improve. do you think he'll become a pro at this rate? he hasn't done anything different in his whole gallery.



edit: tears rolling down my face
Last edited by TyZi; Jan 16, 2016 at 06:43 AM.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Dude, quit drawing these... things... Get good with bodies and for the love of god himself quit making it all jagged and then making it soft in the middle of the eyes. I stick to one brush only.

I'm with TyZi here...
try something new.. everything is the same pose and perspective.. get acquainted with anatomy.. and just practice practice practice
The past makes you wanna die out of regret, and future makes you depressed out of anxiety. So by elimination, the present is likely the happiest time.
Originally Posted by ThePirateKing View Post
try something new.. everything is the same pose and perspective.. get acquainted with anatomy.. and just practice practice practice

the only post i saw so far with any real backing that i'm aware of, nor is white knighting or flaming

anyway, as pirateking said, try out new things

i'm not bothered by the pose and perspective as much as i'm bothered by the general composition. shading and lighting can definitely be improved on as well. i recommend smoothing out the edges to make your work seem less crude.

i hate to put it like this, but i recommend posting somewhere else like deviantart and requesting critique. the art board on toribash is practically dominated by those who shame anything amateurish and considered "outlandish". so, unless you're the general painter who paints people, flowers, and other stuff, you won't get constructive criticism here. just how it is and how it will be.
beware
the goblin
Originally Posted by Marrez View Post
i hate to put it like this, but i recommend posting somewhere else like deviantart and requesting critique. the art board on toribash is practically dominated by those who shame anything amateurish and considered "outlandish". so, unless you're the general painter who paints people, flowers, and other stuff, you won't get constructive criticism here. just how it is and how it will be.

you dont get much critique on dA
The past makes you wanna die out of regret, and future makes you depressed out of anxiety. So by elimination, the present is likely the happiest time.
Originally Posted by ThePirateKing View Post
you dont get much critique on dA

yeah true, even when you request it it doesn't happen often

but it's worth a try
beware
the goblin