Toribash
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Fuck yeah, first to post.
Really good!
Too much of dat ass. It's a bit too big, like Kylie Jenner's.
The nose is weird.
Fingers are crooked but they look alright.
Something about the torso and the breasts seems off.
Overall it's really, really good. Keep it up. Hope to see more from you.
I am just an icon livin'
Originally Posted by Turtle View Post
Fuck yeah, first to post.
Really good!
Too much of dat ass. It's a bit too big, like Kylie Jenner's.
The nose is weird.
Fingers are crooked but they look alright.
Something about the torso and the breasts seems off.
Overall it's really, really good. Keep it up. Hope to see more from you.

Thanks man! great comments, appreciated
dat ass B[

It seems to me like the nose is a bit too long, and the BOOBKS seem a bit too flat for the kind of cleavage that she's showing. Upon further inspection (... well hey, i never claimed that i didn't like boobs), it might be because her sternum is fairly far forward in comparison to the shoulder/neck area (if you drew a plane in extension of the strapped ring a bit further up, it would pass through her ribcage).
There's also something about the visible fingers that seems slightly off to me; i think it's because the middle sections of them are too long? The index finger is fine, but the others seem kind of elongated.

But, all that said, this is still VERY VERY GOOD. You nailed the shading and highlights, and you definitely did get the classic feminine curves right. Honestly, if you weren't asking for CnC, i wouldn't have bothered nitpicking so much. :v
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Originally Posted by Shook View Post
dat ass B[

It seems to me like the nose is a bit too long, and the BOOBKS seem a bit too flat for the kind of cleavage that she's showing. Upon further inspection (... well hey, i never claimed that i didn't like boobs), it might be because her sternum is fairly far forward in comparison to the shoulder/neck area (if you drew a plane in extension of the strapped ring a bit further up, it would pass through her ribcage).
There's also something about the visible fingers that seems slightly off to me; i think it's because the middle sections of them are too long? The index finger is fine, but the others seem kind of elongated.

But, all that said, this is still VERY VERY GOOD. You nailed the shading and highlights, and you definitely did get the classic feminine curves right. Honestly, if you weren't asking for CnC, i wouldn't have bothered nitpicking so much. :v

Mmm tasty CnCereal !
Thanks shooky, wont take your time wasted on this comment for granted.
lol

to me

its looks like you had an amazing drawing and then you just threw a head from another drawing on there without even considering how to connect it

it looks totally way to high and odd

body is good tho
face could use some fixing

http://i.kinja-img.com/gawker-media/...q1az1ibjyg.png

maybe post references too

I like that you captured the shape of the body pretty nicely.
Last edited by Ezeth; Mar 12, 2016 at 05:16 AM.
The face looks kinda masculine, I suggest you change that.

The body frame and everythin else looks pretty good.