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Please tell me wt u think and how i could improve

A little bit overspeeded, But otherwise nice.

I like it 9/10

down cause of the white flashes hapening so often :/

i love the text at the end btw

nice I love the song and the way you made the words in the video work with it.8/10 i didnt like the shader used(doesnt fit your tori)

Hahahah nice vid you have there Moop ! 10/10 from ma i comment on toritube & youtube soon ;)

thank u very much, please dont 4get to comment and rate on toritube

*bumps*

cmon, i released this not even a day ago and already its gone to the second page xD

Are you still willing to have my babies? Come on!

Awesome! And I'll forget to rate and comment on toritube, but it is too darn well synchronized with the song!

if u comment and rate on toritube, i MIGHT have ur babies ;)

be a whole new tori-baby situation...

Ok, i finally downloaded it.

Bonus:
-Music: i liked the song, it has a good rythm
-Synch: u did it very well
-Intro: even if it's nothing impressive i liked how u started ur vid, with the photos and the "karaoke".
-Replays: i liked them, moreover i've seen many(?) sparring replays, it's a big plus.
-Speed/Slow Mo: U did a great job with that, the action goes fast but not too much and the slow mo is almost always well placed.
-Effects: i liked the shaders switching, especially the second time, when u turn back to ur normal shader after u decap uke.


Malus:
-Intro-photo quality: u should make better quality screenshots if u wanna use them in a vid ^^
-Shader: this is a problem i have with ur vids, i never like ur shaders lol. Blue fading into yellow? argh!
-Subliminal 1 frame photos: at around 35 u put another screenshot for less then half a second, it reminded me of the end of fight club, if u know what i mean. U do irt again at 2:15.
-Transition effects: they appear like if u had placed and chosed them randomly
-Flashes: i usually hate them, cause they burn my eyes and unable me to see what's going on, i can like them if used a very few times, imo u used them too much, especially from 0:45 on
-Other effects: watch 0:44->this is ugly, rly.
-Replays cutting: the fight which starts at 1:48 is cutted by a screenshot then u show other replays. I felt like when i was watching doctor house and those stupid commercials interrupted the action. Not good.
-U wrote Editting.

Overall it's a nice video, but it has too many - to get an high vote.
7/10