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replay was really cool but there are some little things that you need to be focusing on
1- keeping the momentum : you seem to be good at getting the momentum but you arent keeping it and alotta times you are stopping it
2- the way of getting decap : i really like the split you did with the flat foot but that decap looked pretty weird because you looked like u pulled the head of the body using your leg
3- the stopping pose : why did you get the decap and leave the replay as it is?
you could get a good pose after this decap so u look really cool and it makes your ''swagness'' better : D


those are my thoughts i hope they helped

Thankx breh!
I'll keep those in mind!
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another? in the same day? :O

wow that went well

movement in the opener was pretty goofy, at frame 540 it looked like you pulled yourself down into the jump too fast for yourself to react to
split was fucking weird i dont know how that happened
after you kicked the shoulder off it wasnt bad, few more dms could have been nice but that was a decent amount in a quick time so gj

shit skeet

this is a replay

dont hack dms its really obvious thanks

Thanks Dezrai!




This is meh, I have a slow computer rn so I can't see if this is slow or fast : (

GEEEAD DAMMIT!
-Bump-

GEEEEEEEEADDDD-AMM-IT!

This is better than that ^
Also Bump.

Wow ok. Jesus Christ is here

Krakken - I usually say that changing direction sucks and leads to forced movements but this is an example of where it looks good. Although at around frame 400 your movement gets rather sloppy and you lead into your head getting bopped the shit out of which you should try to avoid doing in the future. After the decap I think you should've just posed because the kick on the lower body was too many frames after that I sort of just got bored and it seemed really forced to try and make the replay have something else. Overall a really cool replay though I never heard of you and you're really good.

Whiplash - Opener looks amazing, love the unique movement thingo you got going on. The DM's were fairly well executed however you twitched your hands a lot around 180 frames which might have been able to be avoided with some hold and relax but idk. Pretty sick replay tho.

Heavycold - The first thing that catches my eye is the floppy head. In some instances relaxed necks can work and look good although I don't feel this was one of them. Not sure if this was intentional or you just saw it 200 frames in and cba to change it. After the first punch I feel as if you could've went for something a bit more exotic. The grab although got the job done was a pretty boring concept. The decap itself could have been executed a bit better. I don't really like the way your knee doesn't fully extend at any point during the kick.

I hope to see more stuff from you, you're pretty good. How long u been making stuff for??

Thanks man!
I've only been ReplayMaking for about a year :/