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[vid] magic ways
hallo

it actually starts at 0:18

Song:
Magic Ways - Tatsuro Yamashita

Replay makers:
Sonapy
Mack

Programs:
Faps
Sony viva los Vegas
Torobasharu
Last edited by DJYap; Sep 7, 2016 at 12:14 PM.
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edit is good the only thing i'm having problem is with the text having too little animation, it doesn't fit in

also the rewind thing at 0:38 is just not nice at all but keep up the good work
Last edited by poison; Sep 7, 2016 at 06:14 PM.
hi, I like the edit. But the text animation doesn't fit the edit imo. The black part at the start was completely unnecessary, atleast cut it so the part is about 1 sec because almost 30+% of the edit is black screen.

i love tatsuro so ill try not to be bias.

the cc was really 1 tone and i felt didn't fit the song. pink isn't generally what i associate with the song magic ways(but that's more of a personal thing)

the p/c was really stiff like i was moving my neck back and forth try to smooth your keyframes out (inside of sv)

the sync was weird, like you synced weird parts of the replay.

there's a part where your not even syncing a movement, you just put p/c on to emphasize the beat at that point, so definitely work on that.
Last edited by Velair; Sep 14, 2016 at 12:33 AM.
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pink/white text on a pink/white background generally doesnt fare well because it's hard to see

the colours are too abrasive, you can have a vibrant pink without it being so aggressively bright, turning down exposure would fix it a bit i think