HTOTM: FUSION
second stretch between platforms wasn't as good as it could've been

Yeah Ik, I should work on that.
you contracted your right leg too early

Oh so that's why I was slowed down.

Instep - M - Allegiance.rpl: Hey that was pretty good actually, there weren't many hits but still. The opener was nice and fluid. The only dm I didn't really like was the split cause it was not as clean as the others. Besides that, it's a pretty good replay
Originally Posted by Onsola View Post
Yeah Ik, I should work on that.

So I never actually have any good criticism, so I'll go off of what I remember of your replay.
The start was good, run is solid, the first jump is perfect, but that second jump to that next platform is iffy. You took too far of a jump, take another short step before launching up to the platform, that should help with keeping momentum during your run. The roll at the end was.. good, but it defientely could've been better. Try going a little more into your shoulder, maybe that would help. I'm sure you already know that, as you half assed the roll XD gj on the replay, please continue, I'm sure it'd go somewhere if you persisted
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A multiplayer parkour with shadow0242. cnc? I know the beginning run was wonkey, it was in 10 tf
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