alright man, i won't spoil it for anyone, j- oh shit
Bloody sacrifice
although i can't do any better than that (or even close to that) i'll cnc it, as i see a couple things that are a little wonky.
right at the start, during your launch, you lower or relax your arm, then raise it back up again. or smthg like that, i dunno the start seems off.
when you're jumping onto the second island platform, you kinda just rotate your body instead of stepping into it. it doesn't look BAD, but i know you, and i know you could've done better. (happens at around 1830)
at 1640, you use your shin to push yourself up, instead of your feet. again, it looks good, but i know you and i know you could've done better. next time around, maybe try using your feet for that part. it'll provide a challenge and it might look more realistic :P
at 1260, when you jump, i feel like your arm extends outward before you're ready to launch. it's more of a personal preference here, but i'm not a fan of that. you could've waited and gotten a much better jump if you had waited maybe even 5 frames.
at around 1113, you extend your leg, and take the other leg off the ground before your extended one even touches the ground. ew man, the run is really wonky. in this part, even i could've done a better and more solid run, although your flow is much better than mine for sure. please fix that run after you land, it's wonky and you dip and bob during this part.
everything else is absolutely beautiful and so fluid it makes me drool. nice work, but please fix the run when you land
imma say 9/10, it looks amazing and i know you'll do an even better job when you continue!