HTOTM: FUSION
2nd try
ik ill be denied
but its worth a try
Attached Files
[M] Breaking my limits.rpl (381.6 KB, 36 views)
[M] Fanboy.rpl (400.4 KB, 26 views)
[SS] Drago Awake.rpl (985.7 KB, 32 views)
Last edited by Deni; Mar 5, 2017 at 02:37 PM.
Ormo | TANG | Tk | RSO
hi, apparently I'm a recruiter

Breaking my limits:
Opener was pretty neat, a little bit stiff for my taste but the dubble knee was dope.

Something that bugged me a but was the look of your right arm at 580, you extended and contracted the elbow so much in such a short amount of frames.

The following kick at 564 looked a bit weird/weak, I think it would've been better if you didnt contract the knee so fast.

Last kick was a lot better imo


Fanboy:
This opener was a lot better and smoother
everything looked really good until 358, that second touch made you lose too much momentum imo.

The rest of the replay looked really good, I just dont think you choose a good place/way to end it.

Drago Awake
This one is my fav for sure
1250 looked a little bit messy and the last kick was a little bit weak imo, pretty good otherwise


for now I'll probably have to roll with a no, you got the basics down for sure and your replays are not bad, you just gotta pracitice a bit more and try to make your replays feel a little bit more orignial