I've been working on this for two days, Its still super cartoony but I need ideas so if you have any tell me:
WIP!!!
http://imgur.com/BXOP1UH

CNC PLEASE


Program: SkEtChbOoK


list of things to fix:

(Junai): nose es too bag (Fixed in wip 2)
(Dare): More shading so the mouth actually looks like its inside the bigger mouth (Fixed in wip 2)
(Dare): Fix the back of the head stupid kiddo (WILL HAPPEN IN WIP 3)


WIP 2 IS HERE!



THINGS TO DO FOR WIP 3:
(Dare): Fix the back of the head stupid kiddo

I like it! But why is the nose so big?

Great head. Just one thing that's pissing me off about it. The right ear. You should make it so that it's proportional to the left one. Other than that keep us updated with the head because it's fantastic so far.

WIP 2:



CNC PLS!

Loving the head veoo. The tongue seems out of place, though. And you should really add something to the back of the head like Dare suggested. Other than that, you're doing a fantastic job.

thanks, I'm glad u like it <#,3,<#<<#,,3,3,,<#<<3

:3

YEAH IK THE TONGUE LOOKS FUKING WEIRD THO D:

If any of you guys have suggestions, I really want to have something coming out of the mouth or something, here are some of my own ideas (you can just say you like one if you want):

Idea 1: arms/legs trying to get out of him fucking chewing the shit outta those kiddos
Idea 2: A thinner longer tongue thats not symmetrical
Idea 3: REMOVE the fucking tongue veoo >: (

IDK

ILL REMOVE FOR NOW THOUGH

You could incorporate some figures trying to crawl out of the back mouth,
and some hand or face shapes under the skin.


Great work so far

tried some effects:

which version is best

(probably original tbh)

I like everything about the head except for the mouth, the top row of teeth just look awkward.

Hmmmmm I have an idea, Ill try it out, thanks for the CNC,

any other part of the mouth look awk? or just the top?