Toribash
Those aren't bad at all! You're relaxed, which is a plus, and the flow is fairly good. I have to say, however, that the moves are pretty simple, and some more destruction would be nice, too.
So err... Keep going in this direction, it's looking good so far.
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Yeah!

Just like shook said, they arent bad at all. Its just to keep training and you will be very good.

GJ man!
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