i think it's good for a first...well a edit of the first


and here is my second head.


i'm trying to be a robotic artist, not very detailed but with time i will improve!
please post helpfull criticism.

That is actually a pretty good start into the robotics area. I'm sure you'll pick up the tricks of the trade sooner or later.

I think the second head is pretty cool. The lines could be a bit sharper though and I like how both of them don't sport horrible seams.

Overall, nice for a first timer etc.

thank you.

two words... no outlines

you can make do without them and it tends to give a bit of professionalism to the work, imo

good for ur first gl with ur next ones =)