One of my drawings I've done recently, uh.. give me some pointers. Rates/comments, the usual.

Edit: Here's a simple painting too.


Full size-http://img33.imageshack.us/i/1010933.jpg/

It's very good, but the six pack and shoulders look awkward. The right shoulder.

The six pack looks like it's in a circle going in to the belly button, which also looks a bit oversized, and could use some detail/scribbles in it.

But still, 10/10, because even though some of it looks awkward, that is the talent of a professional artist shown right thar.

I see your point now that I look at it that way. Thanks, I'll be updating this post or make new ones for my upcoming drawings/paintings.

Some irregularities, but still 9/10

Some body parts look un-proportional, and the left nipple seems to have disappeared entirely, not to mention that belly button is a bit awkward.

Its good but that's a weird looking 6 pack
8/10

ya 6pack=weird belly button=weird nipple=wtf? U r gewd at drawin men 7/10

I like the boat are there any seamen on it? I dont get it's like on land though or something? confusing painting.... 8/10

Your right. It's an old abandon sail boat stuck in low tide. No, theres no people on it either.

The left (the right side of the drawing) inner elbow looks really odd.....

It's quite, unreal. the body doesn't look very human, but I love shading 6/10.

yea the shading is very good the right and left bicep are a little miss proportioned to eachother but its pretty good in general 7/10 way better than i could do