excellent!
just a few more things then we'll be done.
1. The iris of the eye is great, excellent color choice. I'm just wondering if maybe it's a bit too vivid? perhaps try and make it almost appear as if he has cataracts.
2. the wound is excellent. very realistic. But maybe some sort of rash around it, it seems almost like a cut or tear, instead of an infection.
3. the mark still looks a little too clean. maybe a bright shade of pink/blue around the direct edges would fix that, make it look a little more infected.
4. seems like the edge of a bone should be showing at the bottom of the wound, should be an easy fix.
very, VERY, nice.
just make the changes we talked about via msn and we'll be done here :>