Hi, i made this replay and when i got to where i did whenever i tryed to do somthing cool like flip away somewhere it just look stupid

Please leave comments and ratings and feel free to edit my replay and post back your version

EDIT: I had another go with relax n stuff. its still very bad and i rip my own legs off for no reason :P

If it supposed to be you taking him arm then just falling? I didn't like it D: 3/10 from me.
If ray sees this then be prepared because it's going to get ugly.

That was terrible.

Why would you save a replay of you just BREAKING an arm?
It`s pretty useless. This wasn`t worth posting.

You held, noob opener, use relax, add more effort.
The worst part is you just fell right back down after the grip.
It`d be slightly better if you didn`t grip to DM.

1/10

i editet it fixed and done :3
but seriusly how can u be member and a so bad start
any nice rep lol

I didnt post it cos i think it was the best ever I'm not very good at this game so what the hell do you expect. it may not be the best you have seen but its one of the best ive done and im quite happy with it and thats why i posted it so dont tell me this is a waste of space because I also want to see what other people can do with it k? Also i dont have the patience to practise at this game and use relax more im just getting started.

well.....
:]
then practise

like i said.. i dont have the patience

That's exactly what he did, be happy he actually elaborated on the rating instead of slamming everything he said.


Well then don't expect nice comments. Maybe put some actual effort into replays before posting them and expecting people not to dislike them.

Urm.. i did put some "actual effort" into the replay...

Ok guys, chill. It doesn't matter if it isn't the best replay you've ever seen. No need to shoot it down and insult it to hell. Constructive criticism in future, yeah?

Right, yeah, it was a pretty basic replay. For future replays, you might want to try getting more power in your strikes. Try turning left first, for example, and then spin right so that you've built up a more powerful punch or kick. The more replays you make, the better you'll get.

Also, although your join date indicates otherwise, if you're new enough to Toribash then you might want to hang around Beginner Sanctuary and post some replays there. Users there tend to be a bit more forgiving on people who are 'just getting started' in making replays.