Damn. My Monitor on work is very dark so i don't see all the details, but what i can see i like. That is clash between Gandlaff and Balrog? Hehe. Demon turned out nice, coloring is sound, I personally would add more bright red and yellow for the flame, but this is also ok. Nice touch on the lighting rod but why did u miss to do the same for the demons whip?
5/10 for the art (I have a high standards, but u are young...) 10/10 for the minor and mayor (the way u split the image diagonally) 4/10 for the lightning and the lack of any background (bridge is two dimensional).
All in all solid 6/10.
Continue to draw, use real images that u can find on internet and try to ''remake'' them. That helps! You will learn visually.
Last edited by 8OJ4N; Apr 1, 2010 at 12:23 PM.