Your clanmate 4empionKZ was accepted because he HAD good replays. And your replay are simply not good enough, not up to the standards you need to get into ormo.
The so-called ORMO standard is simple. It's just very high. If you get rejected, don't bother arguing, just make new replays. Someone ought to add the previous sentence to the OP.
Ok this is my sacound try(can I use one replay from the first try? If not I will change it)
Yes you can. You just need to present us some replays that show you are a skilled replaymaker. If the replay from the first try shows your skill, then fine.