lets do some comments <.<
at 2 minuts when it ended, i ahve to say it was quite bad, it wasnt an end, it sounded like the effects failed
the slow part at 120-150 is very good, i like it a lot. but after you could have changed a bit and make it more interesting
also th music should be like a text, intro, midle and conclusion. you missed 1 of those
lots of drums spams.
but for a first music its good, only misses a nice rap
"tiff's in th'a house"