Pate, the lines look dodgy, unsharp even.
Maybe fix that?
I like the idea, but I think the execution can be a liiiiittle bit better :B
I also think you should keep one general style, the red on the legs look way different than the red on the thighs.
Just trying to help Jaxxx out, still his call though.
Also I have some spare time soon Jackie, I will try to match something with the head I made.